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For Emma

Rings of gentle fire crawl from
Crystal eyes half opened with adoration.
With perfumed lips you smile, and the
           First breaths
Of life spread throughout the world.
The trees of green and red embrace your sunlit
Caresses.

          Make this moment last.
          Oh divine Muses, you sisters who see all, who know all
          And who have the power to make time stand still in words,
          Make this moment last.
          Her smile will never be so perfect,
          And her eyes will never gleam like nymph tears again.
          Her skin will never swim in the half light of Dawn,
          And her hair will never cascade like ocean waves again.
          Her gaze will never be so inviting,
          And her embrace will never be so enticing.
          Oh gentle Muses, grant your servant one wish.
          Make this moment last.

Her soft stare brushes against your face
As she fits into your lap,
And you are frozen with awe at the moment.
She sees what's in your mind, and
She sweetly reassures you with a sweeping touch.
Her dress with never be so perfect again.
Her scent will never be so intoxicating.
She will never be more perfect.
Make this moment last.

Ivory flesh softens at a timid touch.
©2007-2009 ~Sporenza
:iconsporenza:

Author's Comments

My first poem in a long time, and inspired by the loveliest of the muses...sigh.

Inspired and dedicated to my Lux Mundi. Come home soon.

As for the poem, it's half written in my usual style, and half of it is written like a Homeric epic. Half of is written about my experiences, half of it written about things I wish would happen.

I tried to write it so you could read that it was either about love or hedonistic lust. I hope it works, and if it does, just take whatever works for you.

Oh, and the title means 'from the earth'. In Ancient Greece the cthonic gods were the evil ones, like the titans and gigantes. Originally though the term was used related to 'Mother Earth' because of the fertility 'from the earth.' I kinda went with the original, less worrisome interpretation.

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:iconblackdragon311:
Very lovely and flow of the words are just awesome. Very wonderful piece that you have here. :clap:

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I am the darkness still drifting through light. Forever shall I be consumed by the torment within.
Clubs: *TheWritersMeow
:iconmystikangel:
This is very beautifully! The words you use are perfect! The imagery is perfect! The flow is perfect! Everything about this poem is PERFECT!!!

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You asked what was wrong and I smiled and said nothing.
Then I turned around and whispered everything.
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:iconmystikangel:
This is very beautifully! The words you use are perfect! The imagery is perfect! The flow is perfect! Everything about this poem is PERFECT!!!

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You asked what was wrong and I smiled and said nothing.
Then I turned around and whispered everything.
~~~
Visit my gallery: [link]
:iconmystikangel:
Oops! sorry that the first post posted twice. My computer messed up...

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You asked what was wrong and I smiled and said nothing.
Then I turned around and whispered everything.
~~~
Visit my gallery: [link]
:iconsporenza:
Thankyou so much. I'm always wary of putting up romantic pieces. You never know if it'll be a bit tacky or not.

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Fin de siecle. Fin du globe.

!!soahc dna yhcrana
:iconsporenza:
You are forgiven for this once, and once only. If this happens again I'll have to yell at you.

And thankyou so much for the kind words.

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Fin de siecle. Fin du globe.

!!soahc dna yhcrana
:iconblackdragon311:
Very true, but you did a good job of putting one together.

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I am the darkness still drifting through light. Forever shall I be consumed by the torment within.
Clubs: *TheWritersMeow
:iconmystikangel:
You are very welcome.

And if it happens again I'm going to throw my computer out the window!

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You asked what was wrong and I smiled and said nothing.
Then I turned around and whispered everything.
~~~
Visit my gallery: [link]
:iconmassokissed:
On the subject of muses Origin of symmetry is now in my top 5 albums, for now, my taste is so fickle. All of it is so good.

oh and SEPTEMBER

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PS3- Live in your world, die in mine.

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