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These slivers of water softly glide
Beneath this broken lance,
Sending moon struck flowers,
And sun tossed stars effortlessly into
          Sun scorced laps.

As with the mourning tempests that ravaged placid plains
The previous scars are forgotten under a light
          And delicate mist.
It is oh so white,
Oh so brief,
Oh so beautiful.

What daggers are these that pierce?
And what hands are these that wish to grasp,
          But only hold?
From what dream were you born?
From what hope?
From what breath


The twinking eyes in the dusk filled skies
Start a shiver in the mountainous river,
Resonating as it spills,
          Overflows into,
                    Is engulfed,
                             Embraces the sea.
                    From stony ground green roots spout
                    And ensare bare chests with a gentleness
                    That exists only in those who have seen
          Those twinkling eyes,
                    Those placid eyes,
                              Those eyes that know no evil.

Gentle breaths now sweep this age tried grass.
They sweep willingly, and sleep willingly, and brush
Themselves against the gentle sighs.

                                                                                   This pale skin is all too soft,

                                                                         These closed eyes all to peaceful,
                                                            Those shallow breaths all to mesmerising,
                                                                              Those soft hands all to gentle.

Forget those corpses left
On broken stone altars.
The eyes of darkened crows and
Withered trees guard them under grim-clouded skies.
Forget those old wounds that left
You tired and broken,
Under blistering heat.
This pale skin is all to soft.
©2008-2009 ~Sporenza
:iconsporenza:

Author's Comments

This is the first poem I've done in a long time...It's a new style for me. I mean, that bleakness that really resided in a lot of my stuff isn't really there. I guess I've gotten over quite a bit of stuff.

And learned Ancient Greek :)

Heh spukeh esti doron

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:iconbeccalicious:
Oh my god it's you! Welcome back to the madness, it has been a while!

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*Writers-Workshop

Scriptwriting Month- it’s here!
:iconcharredqueen:
wow... the poem is... wow....
(and you know ancient Greek, one of the best civilizations known to history. kudos to you my friend. kudos indeed.)

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"The only way to get rid of a temptation is the yield to it. Resist it and your soul grows sick...."
---Oscar Wilde, The Picture of Dorian Gray
:iconmystikangel:
This is amazing! and Welcome back.
The imagery and intense feeling is brings is spectacular. It is beautiful!!!! :+fav:

Greek sounds like a gun lang. to learn. Is it very difficult?

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You asked what was wrong and I smiled and said nothing.
Then I turned around and whispered everything.
~~~
Visit my gallery: [link]
:iconsporenza:
Oh it is oh-so-hard...I felt like crying various times this semester. Sometimes I still do. *damn you aorist stem!*

Thankyou!

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Fin de siecle. Fin du globe.

!!soahc dna yhcrana
:iconmystikangel:
Okay, so maybe I should learn a different lang......
You're welcome!

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You asked what was wrong and I smiled and said nothing.
Then I turned around and whispered everything.
~~~
Visit my gallery: [link]
:iconsporenza:
Latin is apparently very regular...or French! Learn a useful language

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Fin de siecle. Fin du globe.

!!soahc dna yhcrana
:iconsporenza:
*puts a finger to the wind*
*waves vigourously*

Hi! I've gotta catch up on your stuff...

And alas, I'm not a UK Deviant. Curses!

--
Fin de siecle. Fin du globe.

!!soahc dna yhcrana
:iconsporenza:
Thankyou on both counts, my over cooked friend :)

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Fin de siecle. Fin du globe.

!!soahc dna yhcrana
:icontemporaryspace:
That my love was a thunderous roar, a torrent of endless freedom to fall down upon your mind and free your every breath from tomorrow.
For this would me purpose be complete.

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Inbetween

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